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	<title>Comments on: How to recognize elearning bloat</title>
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	<description>Let&#039;s save the world from boring elearning</description>
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		<title>By: Brian Dusablon &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Microsoft Redesigns the iPod Packaging</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-1110</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Dusablon &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Microsoft Redesigns the iPod Packaging</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 17:39:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] remember seeing this a long time ago, but caught it again on an eLearning blog I read, and again laughed and thought it was worth sharing. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] remember seeing this a long time ago, but caught it again on an eLearning blog I read, and again laughed and thought it was worth sharing. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Cathy Moore</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-1027</link>
		<dc:creator>Cathy Moore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Apr 2008 18:09:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Paul--And we haven&#039;t even run it by Legal yet!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Paul&#8211;And we haven&#8217;t even run it by Legal yet!</p>
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		<title>By: Paul Tannahill</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-1015</link>
		<dc:creator>Paul Tannahill</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 31 Mar 2008 18:55:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I ran the cat exercise through an ADA compliance filter and it added this mandated addition:

&quot;In compliance with ADA mandates, seeing-eye cats, individually trained to provide assistance to an individual with a disability to perform some of the functions and tasks that the individual with a disability cannot perform for him or herself are hereby and forthwith excluded from this otherwise complete ban.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I ran the cat exercise through an ADA compliance filter and it added this mandated addition:</p>
<p>&#8220;In compliance with ADA mandates, seeing-eye cats, individually trained to provide assistance to an individual with a disability to perform some of the functions and tasks that the individual with a disability cannot perform for him or herself are hereby and forthwith excluded from this otherwise complete ban.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Dave&#8217;s Whiteboard &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Training: getting to lean</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-864</link>
		<dc:creator>Dave&#8217;s Whiteboard &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Training: getting to lean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Mar 2008 19:50:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Moore wrote the other day about elearning bloat, though it&#8217;s clear that she doesn&#8217;t think bloat&#8217;s limited to elearning. She [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Moore wrote the other day about elearning bloat, though it&#8217;s clear that she doesn&#8217;t think bloat&#8217;s limited to elearning. She [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Cathy Moore</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-797</link>
		<dc:creator>Cathy Moore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 19:14:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wendy, I agree that &quot;white&quot; space can make a huge difference, and   speaking directly to the learner is a powerful approach. One of the simplest and most effective changes we can make is to rewrite something so it says &quot;you.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wendy, I agree that &#8220;white&#8221; space can make a huge difference, and   speaking directly to the learner is a powerful approach. One of the simplest and most effective changes we can make is to rewrite something so it says &#8220;you.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Cathy Moore</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-796</link>
		<dc:creator>Cathy Moore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 19:11:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Chris, I&#039;ve also got journalism training. I think a lot of what we learned from our journalism teachers could be applied to elearning. It&#039;s a shame that instructional design programs don&#039;t seem to spend much time on developing a tight writing style.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Chris, I&#8217;ve also got journalism training. I think a lot of what we learned from our journalism teachers could be applied to elearning. It&#8217;s a shame that instructional design programs don&#8217;t seem to spend much time on developing a tight writing style.</p>
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		<title>By: Cathy Moore</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-795</link>
		<dc:creator>Cathy Moore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 19:09:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Marty, thanks for reporting your problems with the video. It&#039;s working for me at the moment. If your workplace restricts YouTube, it&#039;s possible you&#039;d get some sort of &quot;not available&quot; message. Or maybe the video went offline briefly and is now back.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marty, thanks for reporting your problems with the video. It&#8217;s working for me at the moment. If your workplace restricts YouTube, it&#8217;s possible you&#8217;d get some sort of &#8220;not available&#8221; message. Or maybe the video went offline briefly and is now back.</p>
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		<title>By: Marty</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-791</link>
		<dc:creator>Marty</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 17:01:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sadly, the video says it is no longer available. And, I have a feeling it tells the story perfectly!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sadly, the video says it is no longer available. And, I have a feeling it tells the story perfectly!</p>
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		<title>By: What Can Apple Vs. Microsoft Teach Us About Ministry? &#124; Said at Southern Seminary</title>
		<link>http://blog.cathy-moore.com/2008/03/how-to-recognize-elearning-bloat/comment-page-1/#comment-789</link>
		<dc:creator>What Can Apple Vs. Microsoft Teach Us About Ministry? &#124; Said at Southern Seminary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 14:28:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Cathy Moore for the video (no relation to Dr. [...]</description>
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		<title>By: wendy phillips</title>
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		<dc:creator>wendy phillips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 01:36:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh so true and one of my main missions when creating &#039;stuff&#039; along with using space (white or otherwise) and images effectilvely.  

I find keeping the tone conversational really helps to get rid of bloat - speak to the person at the other end of the medium as though they were right in front of you and you quickly realise what is plain silly and can be removed from your content!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh so true and one of my main missions when creating &#8216;stuff&#8217; along with using space (white or otherwise) and images effectilvely.  </p>
<p>I find keeping the tone conversational really helps to get rid of bloat &#8211; speak to the person at the other end of the medium as though they were right in front of you and you quickly realise what is plain silly and can be removed from your content!</p>
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